Jesus Liked Working...

I think this is well drawn but I also feel that anatomically the forearm is a bit short and the hand is a bit meaty. I also think the plank of the cross should be thicker, more square all around. If pencils are your chosen medium I would encourage you to add more tonal values to your drawings to increase depth to your work. Also in this piece if the theme is "Jesus liked working with his hands" I would have focused more definitively on the hand itself rather than so much of the actual arm. A close up drawing of the hand, curling in pain, with the nail sticking out of it would be a much stronger image all around. Still I think what you've done here is good.